Solitude Poems: 113 / 500

Bliss!

Rating: 4.9

Wandering in the the valley of love
Listening to the rustling of autumn leaves
Absorbing the occult dewdrops of solitude
Singing along with the birds
Hearkening to whispers of the deep woods
Dancing to the psychedelic tunes of love
In a wave of ecstasy, i am lost
Lost in His loving intimacy
Sinking myself in the spiritual happiness
Appeased by His love
Experiencing marvels on my way
Feeling the bliss of Paradise here on Earth
I attain salvation from these worldly affairs.

© Aarzoo Mehek

Bliss!
Saturday, December 26, 2015
Solitude Poems: 113 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,salvation,solitude,spiritual
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 03 January 2016

A celestial moment immortalized through sweet verse! The happiness we feel at a heightened moment of being one with the universal spirit is something unparalleled. There is a serene calm about such a joy. Beautifully put and enjoyed reading it! A 10

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2015

In a wave of ecstasy, i am lost Lost in His loving intimacy Sinking myself in the spiritual happiness Appeased by His love.. Such a spiritual turn from nature. You begin with a peaceful meditation and conversing with the nature only to land in the paradise..... a wonderful spiritual poem. thank you very much. you are a gifted poetess. thank you. tony

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Aarzoo Mehek 27 December 2015

Appreciate your time and valuable feedback... it means a lot. Thanks once again for joining me in this journey of poetry

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 December 2015

A n excellent hymn full of rhyme and earnest desire to attain spiritual happiness by devotion of the Almighty God. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Aarzoo Mehek 26 December 2015

Thank you so much for appreciating my work. It has encouraged me to share my poems.

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Nabakishore Dash 25 November 2021

Very nice spiritual poem.'lost in His loving intimacy' superb expression.Top marks.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 November 2021

i am lost lost in his loving intimacy, sinking myself in the spiritual happiness...great spiritual expression!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 July 2021

Valley of love.... the focus! A sweet poem...5 stars

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Varsha M 09 July 2021

Mesmerizing Aarzoo ma'am. We all seek worldly pleasure to keep us better. Portrayal of valley y love is explicit. Well organized. It begins here and moves till the end.

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Lasaad Tayeb 09 July 2021

Another wonderful poem of nature praise in the presence of the great feelings of love.5*

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