Nine black and white cows
Graze on a lush green pastures
Boys watch from afar.
Copyright 2018, Rose Marie Juan -Austin, All Rights Reserved
An excellent piece of artistry, the beauty of having readers analyzed and interpret in many forms the poetry given.10+
Another beautiful imaged write. A painting in words.++10
This is an amazing little poem that takes my memory to lush green pastures where I was a part time cowherd in my school days (because I was not good at studies) . I could not just guess, out of 9 cows how many were black and how many were white? Whatever may be children must have enjoyed it...Full marks!
I can see a lush green pasture with black and white cows. Great picture!
Economical use of words, but the message is the best.Cows do no discrimination, but man, on earth is expert discriminator.Man does all hateful sins, others serve man.Thanks to your poetic acumen Mam., ,
Those boys must be the cowboys who have to bring back the cows to their stable. A serene country's scenery, that will stay in our minds. Thank you so much for sharing this picture-perfect scene. A 10+++++++++++++++++++ vote
Nine black and white cows Graze on a lush green pastures Boys watch from afar............iimpressive depiction. Beautiful poem.10
Watching is a nice pastime....your poem gives a pleasing effect....little cute poem 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
In nature all colors mixes together. Wish we could say same for humans. Great metaphor.