Blasphemy Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Blasphemy

Rating: 3.9


Forbidden garden were planted with black roses
Emitting smells of long gone corpses
Abandoned for purity
Extricated from beneath of sunken earth
The soils were crumpling and humid
Turning it into after burnt colors
Trespassers wouldn’t take a second look
To determine what’s left for Hell
Is not left for Heaven
The brooding and legitimate darkness
Of impurities will soon
Breeds the seeds of Satan impersonating priests
All Hell breaks loose
Somebody with empowerment and virgin
Have to seal the floodgate
Children’s of the damned are crusading
An army of bona fide blasphemies
Exorcising the wicket link
Pathfinders will soon start
Surveying the pinnacles
The annihilation of the world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rajagopal h 01 March 2008

i can understand the agony of the current scenario of spiritualism devoid of love and divinity....great piece

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ngaio beck 03 March 2008

More prophecy than poetry.You've certainly 'got it right'. Salaam!

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Konye obaji Ori 08 March 2008

this is a very celestial poem, i think.....it has powerful diction, tone and apt imagery...so beautifully writen....i read it over and over and i loved it, a lot...Bravo!

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an angry poem! I liked the content! ! ! Forbidden garden were planted with black roses Emitting smells of long gone corpses-----> you chose the suitable words 100% right...

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Roland Bastien 19 April 2008

All Hell breaks loose Somebody with empowerment and virgin Have to seal the floodgate --------------- he already unlocked the west side paradise door souls from the transmigrated land paced into the land a bright light arised

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Francisco R. Albano 07 April 2008

Striking imagery. Correct the grammatical mistakes and it gets a 10! Is English your first language?

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Aine Ní Leidhin 13 March 2008

Ideology’s desire to make its own canon and perspective the only acceptable choice results in intolerance and persecution as all other perspectives are denounced as heretical or perhaps even evil. Kind regards Aine

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Not The Pilot 11 March 2008

i really like the words used. i see it.... good job...

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