Aqua Flower

Blazing Fires

As we kissed under the cool sheets
our bodies warmed the bed
both hungry for love
we knew soon we would be fed
your lips on mine
our tongues entwined
leaving behind all that is wrong
forsaking where we belong
releasing our intense desires
passion revealed in blazing fires
extinguished only by our lovemaking
love that will never be forsaken
carrying on with yesterdays remembered
reminiscing on that sweet surrender

Lion and Tigress series
copyright @ Aqua Flower

Topic(s) of this poem: affairs, love, passion

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 1, 2018
Poem Edited: Sunday, March 17, 2019

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Comments about Blazing Fires by Aqua Flower

  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (8/21/2018 7:10:00 AM)

    It reads even better the second time! Keep on penning my friend!

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet SimonHoward The Motivational Poet Simon (8/21/2018 7:09:00 AM)

    Pregnant with a passion that perfumes the atmosphere with an aroma of romance that runs like a river! Well done my friend!

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (8/9/2018 7:33:00 AM)

    your lips on mine
    our tongues entwined
    leaving behind all that is wrong
    forsaking where we belong
    releasing our intense desires
    passion revealed in blazing fires..beautiful poem full of romance and passion and eros....... thank u dear poetess. tony

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (7/5/2018 7:55:00 AM)

    An amazing romantic poem! I appreciate your lovely poetic expression: we belong/releasing our intense desires/passion revealed in blazing fires/extinguished only by our lovemaking/love that will never be forsaken! Top marks!

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(7/5/2018 11:02:00 AM)

    Thank you. I am honored by your comment. I was in a good frame of mind when writing it! :)

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  • Lungelo S MbuyaziLungelo S Mbuyazi (7/3/2018 2:32:00 PM)

    A lovely poem written with passion and it's so passionate...I vote 10++

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(7/5/2018 5:59:00 AM)

    Good morning and thank you for visiting this poem and for your lovely comment. Love and romance are my favoritie to write about!

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  • Riza BraholliRiza Braholli (6/17/2018 5:02:00 PM)

    OW a poem very hot. great; according to my wishes: sensual and wound up to striking

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(6/17/2018 7:44:00 PM)

    Love and Romance are unique in what we wish for! Thank you for reading!

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (5/31/2018 2:33:00 PM)

    Exotically romantic. Lovely and very passionate. A smooth flow for joy. Thanks for sharing.

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(6/17/2018 7:43:00 PM)

    Romance always creates a smooth flow! thank you for your comment! :)

    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(5/31/2018 8:06:00 PM)

    Love and joy are always flowing where there is passion! Exotically Romanticis such a nice descritption of the poem! thank you!

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  • Bri EdwardsBri Edwards (5/20/2018 5:15:00 PM)

    (continued) ....i might suggest switching the positions of lines ten and eleven, so extinguished will immediately follow blazing fires. this is a VERY 'HOT' POEM. well done! i'd rate it 9 3/4, but i only rate with a number if a poet begs me to do it. my comments act as my rating. the only thing which could improve my 'poetic' experience here would be a nice colorful photo of hot being performed, ................by humans preferably.
    bri :)

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(5/20/2018 6:03:00 PM)

    I welcome adjustments and your input! thank you! ....sorry no pictures...I will leave it up to the readers to visualize. I know how well poets can do this! :)

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  • Bri EdwardsBri Edwards (5/20/2018 5:13:00 PM)

    (cont.) ...you use forsaking and forsaken. it sounds to me as though you two each are 'supposed' to be in someone else's bed! ! ! but you are abandoning the 'rightful' beds and delving into a 'sometimes-forbidden pastime' of unfaithfulness to others, quenching your passions elsewhere. oh well! (cont.) ...

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(5/20/2018 6:01:00 PM)

    Yes the poem is suppose to have that affect......an affair! :)

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  • Bri EdwardsBri Edwards (5/20/2018 5:02:00 PM)

    (cont.) ...the only possible thing i've noticed that might not be quite correct, English-wise, is yesterday's. i don't know if you are talking about remembering a group of past days aka yesterdays, or if you are talking about something that happened yesterday aka yesterday's....something. (cont.) ...

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(5/20/2018 5:58:00 PM)

    That is true...it's suppose to be yesterdays....thank you! I'll make an edit! :)

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  • Bri EdwardsBri Edwards (5/20/2018 5:01:00 PM)

    (cont.) ...a third of my way through the reading, my mouth 'fell open' and remained that was to the end. wow! very captivating/stimulating; i may have to excuse myself for a few minutes! ! ! to MyPoemList. (cont.) ...

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  • Bri EdwardsBri Edwards (5/20/2018 4:54:00 PM)

    i was looking a the several poems PH 'suggests' for readers to read (from you) and i was GOING TO READ:
    Give Me The Pen, which i still may, BUT then i saw this title and part of the first line** and i, OF COURSE, had to read this one! !
    ** Blazing Fires As we kissed under the cool sheets our bodies.............yes! that will bring a 'old man' running to read, ........if nothing else. (to continued) .....

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(5/20/2018 6:04:00 PM)

    old doesn't mean dead :)

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (5/10/2018 5:35:00 AM)

    Both hungry for love!

    Thanks for sharing.

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(5/20/2018 6:05:00 PM)

    Thank you for your comments! :)

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  • Bipasha DBipasha D (5/1/2018 10:32:00 PM)

    A sensual, passionate write.

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(5/4/2018 5:18:00 AM)

    Thank you for reading this poem and your comments!

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  • Carl RoussellCarl Roussell (5/1/2018 9:34:00 PM)

    This is really good, where emotional and physical love are as one. A 10.

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(5/4/2018 5:19:00 AM)

    Glad you enjoyed it. Poetry is always full of emotion...good and bad but I like the good ones! :)

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  • Robert Murray SmithRobert Murray Smith (5/1/2018 9:14:00 PM)

    Rainbow Flower your poem has caught fire inflaming all desires. A wondeful romantic write.+++10

    Robert

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    Aqua FlowerAqua Flower(5/4/2018 5:20:00 AM)

    Thanks Robert, as always, for reading and commenting! :)

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