Blood Instead Of Tears Poem by Asif Baloch

Eating agony - drinking pain - this is a very dark, strong poem. Well versed and reads slow with good wording. A Ten.

Tears, pain and grief...are the elements that touch u most and bring the best out of you...another moving work.

very very nice piece.i think this one as written while you were indeed in the throes of pain...it has that poignancy that accompanies pieces which are reflections of bits of your life...well done!

A very sad write reflecting mental agony.Liked it.A 10!

A very nice poem and so true...

a very touchy poem............ it touched my heart and soul. but you sounded very sad and in pain. Eid mubarak to you and your family.

An intriguing piece; personally, I prefer punctuation for smoother grammatical flow; when we apply God's Word & Principles to our lives, we are to be more than conquerors, so that we can more free shed tears of joy, rather than the blood from toiling. Be blessed and keep writing! -Joe

Masterly written although I do not agree with all the things you have said. A sudden severe shock or failure may also trigger the desire to shed blood So 9 for this piece.

Very sad indeed is man's life. A very miserable write. U get 10++

The trauma gyrating that I enjoy seeing as Inseperable indeed sorrow and joy untill death he or she. your expression fine! I am on line! giving u 10 vote-shine!