Love is a battle
That makes us weak
A battle of the heart
That one cannot defeat
When my mind takes control
My body begins to surrender
Leaving a wound behind
For the heart to remember
Insanity attempts victory
Losing my ways of thoughts
Defeat the undefeated
Were the battles I was taught
Without you, my heart bleeds
Injuries upon my soul
Blood stained memories
Are the ones beyond my control
With toil, tears and sweat
Love as my choice of weapon
But to no avail
Has put my heart in execution
i really like this cant wait to read the next chapter! ! ! ! !
I love this chaper, it brings backs memories. You find a way to express feelings as it is and that is so pwerful.
a Wonder of lines like a dose of medicine that conquer our Hearts....Congratulation my Dear Friend...God bless
A great fiery sense of love and its experience whether bitter or sweet....Nice Work
this is beautiful! i love it. love love love, it always makes our countenance to fall.....good write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
its a battlefield indeed. i love the emotion and the flow of words. this is really a nice piece of literary art. thank you.. diane