Blood Thirsty Until The End Poem by Uriah Hamilton
Blood Thirsty Until The End
For you, sweetheart,
I’d become a hit man
Employed at your discretion
If you merely ask,
That’s the depth of my obsession!
I can handle
Any extreme ravages,
I can stare death
Unblinkingly in the face,
I’m unconcerned
With where you travel,
I can live in any place.
I’ve seen your arms
Wrapped around many men,
I’m not jealous, sweetheart,
I’ll patiently wait my turn.
This is going to be
A wildly intoxicating romance,
We’re going to be
Criminally cool
And blood thirsty until the end!
I liked this piece a lot. If I had one reservation it would be that I was looking for the flow, rythym and rhyme of the first two verses to have continued into the last two. But that is personal choice. It still makes for an entertaining piece.
Wow! The passion in this poem is amazing! It gave me chills.
Excellent! You write with such passion and fire. A joy to read. Warmest regards, CJ
Hmmmm....intense straight to the point poem....I like it alot! .
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 12:11:43 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Well! :) I like it, Uriah. It's good....Nothing to pick on...no nits...Just a very good poem!