Crimson Love

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Bloodied Page Of Lies - Poem by Crimson Love

Blank lines fill with blood,
the words much to red to speak,
have been uttered past broken teeth,
heated past melting,
ink fades,
lines- and words disperse among,
a bloodied page.

Swollen- engorged with heat,
bleeding through your ink,
truth is seen,
the distortions in which tongues wrestle,
finally a falsity,
rests upon the tip of your tongue.
and longs to destroy,
everything I've ever known to be true.
and every spilled word,
my pen bled for.


Comments about Bloodied Page Of Lies by Crimson Love

  • (12/19/2011 12:26:00 AM)


    The co-relation of this poem with its title is exceptionally superb! ! Great poem there worthy for digestion (Report) Reply

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  • (12/19/2011 12:15:00 AM)


    wow ahmazing very well written i could pictuer it in my head (Report) Reply

  • (12/19/2011)


    you write with rich imagery -...its like i can picture the blood pouring on a page spilling the words that cant be said... truly a brilliant write! (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/18/2011 1:55:00 PM)


    My pen bled for! ! !
    I think colour of truth is white and black for lie! ! ! !
    But a heart sayin' truth in red-colour! ! !
    A g'd poem! ! ! 10++
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 16, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 17, 2011


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