Blue Sea Whales, Portrait Poems Poem by Captain Cur

Blue Sea Whales, Portrait Poems

Rating: 2.8


Deep shadow forcing rippled surface wake;
defying gravity great blow ships sail,
leaping open water turn sideways break,
splash monolithic lunging blue sea whales.

Whales song ping chords oceanic serenade,
mates hear shrill bare raspy choral rounds,
notes long loud song orchestral thoughts pervade,
clasp hearts fins dart strumming tonal sounds

receding home exposing lone willfulness;
behemoth strength, unnerving length fanning tail
inspiring dreams, mammoth scenes peacefulness,
retiring sun, peripheral moonlit
blue sea whales.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 09 June 2014

Well written captain cur

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Valsa George 08 September 2012

Hmm! The monolithic sea whales with mammoth strength and unnerving length splashing in the deep blue! ! Those behemoths are awesome and dreadful at the same time! Your first hand experience of having seen them (encountered? ?) gives ur description such force and vividness!

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Valerie Dohren 05 September 2012

Whales are wonderful creatures, especially the Dolphin - love to swim with one, butI don't swim! ! Great write.

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Mark Dillon 04 September 2012

must be a fantastic sight to witness on the open sea, great write showing their majesty

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Eric Cockrell 04 September 2012

perhaps the real dominant species!

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