Bonaparte Poem by Brian Dorn

Sounds like you have met your Waterloo... Poem has a catchy beat to it, liked it a lot, Brian

dump her! (only kiddin') it does describe the 'situation' wonderfully. al.

This is fine write - I especially admire your terseness and original imagery. The crafty Buonaparte specialised in appearing where he was not expected. A complex and haunting write. - Will

Understood. It's that situation that makes you feel like your blood flows both ways at once. Esra

Hi Brian, excellent.. very clever use of words and captures wonderfully the complications which relationships often bring...well done.

You definitely captured this, however love games are very dangerous games to play.--Melvina--

i know this game. it's never fun, and no-one wins. lovely way to capture it all with words though. nice job.: -) Virginie

That's why we love them! And when you finally work it out and think you've captured her heart for sure, that's exactly when you'll lose it. It's the sweetest game. Great representative wordplay.Clever, clear and concise.

dump her and take me! just kidding, brian - i like how my tongue works when telling this one. great craft!

hey brian.. this is an interesting poem...cleverly penned... excellent! Asma...