Can'T Escape Poem by Brian Dorn
Can'T Escape
From the corner of my eye
Hard to fathom what I saw
Turned my head as if to try
And into love so deep I fall
Unlike I've ever felt before
It tossed and turned me like a storm
Nothing's made me troubled more
Nor, ever have I felt so warm
Eyes that capture mine in chains
Oh, so tightly locked to yours
Finding comfort in this pain
Gripped so tight forever more
Don't ever let me look away
Please never, never let me go
In your eyes I want to stay
In your heart I want to grow
So content, you make me feel
Alive inside your garden eyes
Nothing's ever felt so real
Can't escape, won't even try
This is one of my favorites... Hey Brian, ESCAPE from wherever you are... I miss your poems...k
Romantic and beautiful Brian, I see why it made the Top 500. Keep writing my friend, you are a wonderful poet.---Melvina---
Beautiful poem, Brian...trips along nicely without missing a (heart) beat. Full credit to you :) jack. (is the 'p' problem the one symtomatic of PH, or is 'gripped' a mis-spelling?)
Lovely tribute to the lady of your dreams- you make me feel Alive inside your garden eyes- - > that is a gorgeous descriptive
Just stumbled upon this poem with a related poems link from another poem, and it is great! Fabulous work. Write more.
In your eyes I want to stay In your heart I want to grow ................................................ Nothing's ever felt so real Can't escape, won't even try ................................................. You have seized a divine spark from a corner of your eye and have lighted an eternal fire of love, too lovely rhyme, simply wonderfully, Brian. Tsira
Encompassed by love, never wanting to leave. Delightful poem: D
Those words 'garden eyes' captivate me! This has the sound of an Elizabethan love song - delightful. Linda
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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i'm hooked by 'garden eyes'...makes me wonder about what was seen from 'the corner of my eye'...hypnotic love very close to obsession though. mesmerizing work, Brian. -Tailor