Can'T Escape Poem by Brian Dorn
Can'T Escape
From the corner of my eye
Hard to fathom what I saw
Turned my head as if to try
And into love so deep I fall
Unlike I've ever felt before
It tossed and turned me like a storm
Nothing's made me troubled more
Nor, ever have I felt so warm
Eyes that capture mine in chains
Oh, so tightly locked to yours
Finding comfort in this pain
Gripped so tight forever more
Don't ever let me look away
Please never, never let me go
In your eyes I want to stay
In your heart I want to grow
So content, you make me feel
Alive inside your garden eyes
Nothing's ever felt so real
Can't escape, won't even try
Brian, this surely must touch a responsive cord with anyone who has ever been in love. A wonderful poem. A ten for this fine piece.
no we cant escape from the reality of falling in love...i often wonder why we dont rise in love? surely that would be better...
That Jack Russell's a funny guy! ! This is a terrifically well written poem Brian. It's excellent from end to end. Tells the story of falling in love as quickly as it happens and transmits all the emotion of the process and what it means to you straight into the reader's mind and heart. jim
I love this one. It's actually quite a reminder of my life. PERFECT!
Lovely tribute to the lady of your dreams- you make me feel Alive inside your garden eyes- - > that is a gorgeous descriptive
Just stumbled upon this poem with a related poems link from another poem, and it is great! Fabulous work. Write more.
In your eyes I want to stay In your heart I want to grow ................................................ Nothing's ever felt so real Can't escape, won't even try ................................................. You have seized a divine spark from a corner of your eye and have lighted an eternal fire of love, too lovely rhyme, simply wonderfully, Brian. Tsira
Encompassed by love, never wanting to leave. Delightful poem: D
Those words 'garden eyes' captivate me! This has the sound of an Elizabethan love song - delightful. Linda
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I like this line a lot even though it provokes that garden of Eden with its sense of innocence - and a beginning just as this poem is: Alive inside your garden eyes.