From My Poems To Yours Poem by Brian Dorn

From My Poems To Yours

Rating: 4.6


Uniquely different, you and I
But, doing as we damn well please
We're products of intelligent design
No settling for mediocrity

Poetically inclined and wired to rhyme
Economy of word our specialty
United in our same frame of mind
On an airline of creativity

Brazen, bold and expression stone cold
Unabashed and self promoted
Sifting through thoughts for solid gold
My love poems served sugar coated

Unshrouded, outed and oxidized
Stripped of guilt and irrational fear
Unapologetic and diversified
Kings of our own atmosphere

Nothing off limits, every word fair play
From arousal to anticlimactic
Pesky emotions caught in the fray
Some subtle, others clearly emphatic

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 25 July 2019

This poet has not posted anything new for more than 12 years, people, so I doubt he will see the messages you are leaving!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 April 2019

From one person to another poetic expression differs. Love poems are just like scented flowers. This poem is very brilliantly penned. Airline of expression motivates mind....10

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Not a member No 4 14 June 2007

I love your honesty Brian Dorn. It shines through in all that you write - that you write so very well. This is another fine example of your unique art. Best to you. jim

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Patti Masterman 27 April 2007

This is my very favorite part of poetry..poems about poem writing. Very clever ideation here. Words seem to slip through effortlessly.

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Original Unknown Girl 23 March 2007

What a great poem Brian, so very true on all counts. Isn't it funny how when we read another's work we can see that there is part of what they've written in one of ours? Like there is a silent conversation between players... I think that's what you're conveying here. Nevertheless on any count this poem is just lovely. HG: -) xx

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Susan Williams 09 September 2020

Poetically inclined and wired to rhyme Economy of word our specialty- - - - - - - - > actually very romantic, just add candlelight and wine

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 February 2020

Nothing off limits, every word fair play From arousal to anticlimactic../// it's superb poem; greatly I enjoyed

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 July 2019

The innovative conceptualization as also the theme are simply superb. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Rae Seagull 25 July 2019

Quite a unique poem! Congratulations on POTD, Brian

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Prabir Gayen 25 July 2019

Very beautiful poem dear poet. Thank /////

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