Brian Dorn

Rookie - 5 Points (1965 / United States)

From My Poems To Yours - Poem by Brian Dorn

Uniquely different, you and I
But, doing as we damn well please
We're products of intelligent design
No settling for mediocrity

Poetically inclined and wired to rhyme
Economy of word our specialty
United in our same frame of mind
On an airline of creativity

Brazen, bold and expression stone cold
Unabashed and self promoted
Sifting through thoughts for solid gold
My love poems served sugar coated

Unshrouded, outed and oxidized
Stripped of guilt and irrational fear
Unapologetic and diversified
Kings of our own atmosphere

Nothing off limits, every word fair play
From arousal to anticlimactic
Pesky emotions caught in the fray
Some subtle, others clearly emphatic


Comments about From My Poems To Yours by Brian Dorn

  • (6/14/2007 3:33:00 PM)


    I love your honesty Brian Dorn. It shines through in all that you write - that you write so very well. This is another fine example of your unique art. Best to you. jim (Report) Reply

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  • (4/27/2007 6:28:00 PM)


    This is my very favorite part of poetry..poems about poem writing.
    Very clever ideation here. Words seem to slip through effortlessly.
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  • (3/23/2007 9:46:00 AM)


    What a great poem Brian, so very true on all counts. Isn't it funny how when we read another's work we can see that there is part of what they've written in one of ours? Like there is a silent conversation between players... I think that's what you're conveying here. Nevertheless on any count this poem is just lovely. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • (2/16/2007 5:28:00 PM)


    What you see from your window on the world is uniquely your own. But we are all united in the common cause of poetry. Very insightful and very wise. My applause for this one, Brian.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (10/24/2006 1:14:00 PM)


    Great poem Brian.
    Defiantely one that makes me realize how united and lucky we are to have an incredible site like this one to join us together.
    ~Amber~
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  • (10/2/2006 8:59:00 AM)


    an amazing poem..
    i enjoyed reading this 1 too...

    regards...
    asma..
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  • (9/28/2006 11:51:00 AM)


    Economical with the truth here B, and a fine economy it is. Whether for one person or addressed to all, it matters not to the reader; a well-flowing piece (the acceptance of difference - which is part of the appreciation of good poets and good poetry - is somehow furthered by the rhythm) . This is.... grand. And a lesson to all, perhaps! t x (Report) Reply

  • (8/17/2006 1:07:00 PM)


    Never a truer word spoken. Esra Sloblock (Report) Reply

  • (8/17/2006 11:39:00 AM)


    you use words so well, brian, in this well structured poem...loved it...nalini (Report) Reply

  • (8/8/2006 4:24:00 PM)


    Terrific. I particulary like the 3rd stanza. Solid gold there. -chuck (Report) Reply

  • Tailor Bell (8/7/2006 11:49:00 PM)


    Fantastic piece with great structure. -Tailor (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2006 5:58:00 PM)


    I just love that poem, Brian. You express some of our passions in it. Thanks for all the encouragements.

    Ivy
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  • (7/31/2006 1:08:00 PM)


    Wow, that is really good! how old are you by the way?
    X X X Chloe
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  • (7/30/2006 7:30:00 PM)


    Hi Brian, Nice to see you wrote something new. It was really unique. I liked it a lot. Your a great writer Brian. Take care. (Report) Reply

  • (7/29/2006 3:11:00 AM)


    An expression placing your being in the here and now
    Love duncan X
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/28/2006 8:31:00 PM)


    And so we all aren't we...and are we ashamed of our unabashed aloof majestties? hell no! 'Tis all part of the greatest art on Earth, and aren't we proud to be in it!
    Fine Penning of clarion, & genuinity! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''frank/fjr
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  • (7/27/2006 7:18:00 PM)


    Well, whoever this is for, kudos for meriting such a glowing tribute! I could hazard a guess. Fantastic write, Brian. Esther : ] (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2006 3:56:00 AM)


    Brian, this is great! Your poetic voice rings out in this insightful and charming write. Really liked these two lines:
    'Poetically inclined and wired to rhyme', 'Kings of our own atmosphere'

    Justine.
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  • (7/26/2006 6:00:00 PM)


    Very intelligently said Brian! Only when one can free their mind can one write poetry, thanks for a good read! (Report) Reply

  • (7/26/2006 1:23:00 PM)


    I personally enjoy rhyming poems, along with freestyles also....I too like the wording to this one, nice choice of words! Yeah...poetry is doing what you please, with much feeling! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 26, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 19, 2010


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