Thursday, September 3, 2015

Bou Akhire Mu Comments

Rating: 4.2

Bou!
Mu tora sei
Sabukichhi pariparuthiba jhiate
Tora adhura swopnaku
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Bharati Nayak
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Abhipsa Panda 19 February 2019

Maa ra drusti re jhia sabeu bele sundar laage...jhia ra raaga, dosa sabu maa hi sahi thaaye, tenu, jhia ra sabu rupa ku ekutia maa hi jaani thaaye.......maa aau jhianka samparka bahut sundr bhaabe aapankar kavita dwaara aame paicchun....bahut badhia

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Jolly S Lee 23 May 2018

MAA jhia, tar jhia, au tar jhia... Flowing relationship time immemorial.

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Bharati Nayak 24 May 2018

Thank you Jolly for your visit to this poem.It is nice to hear some one talking in my language. Hope to read more of your poems on this Site.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 16 April 2018

I love this poem. This poem is very beautiful. Thanks for shearing with us. 10+++++

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Bharati Nayak 16 April 2018

Thank you Sri Suratha Kumar Rout for reading, commenting and rating my poem. A daughter derives strength from mother's love.The Mother also finds fulfilment in her daughter's success.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 January 2018

Tu kahu/Mu sundar/Sabu shadhi kale mote mane….I have already read the English version of this wonderful piece of work! It’s pulsating piece of poetry! Each time I read it, I feel my mother’s love…..I salute to this amazing piece of poetry from the bottom of my heart!

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Bharati Nayak 16 April 2018

' Each time I read it, I feel my mother’s love'- - - Such beautiful words of appreciation for this poem ! ! ! I Thank you so much Poet Dillip Kumar Swain.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2015

ମା ଓ ଝିଅ ମଧ୍ୟରେ ସମ୍ପର୍କ ଅତୀବ ନିବିଡ. ଆପଣ ଏହି କବିତା ରେ ମନ୍ତ୍ରମୁଗ୍ଧ କରିବା ପରି ମୁ ବସ୍ତବତାର ବସନା ବାରି ପରିଚି. ମା ର ମମତା ଏହି ସଂସାରରେ ବିରଳ. ଏହି କବିତାଟି ହୃଦୟସ୍ପର୍ଶୀ ହୋଇଚି. ଏଭଳି ସୁନ୍ଦର କବିତା ଲେଖି ଅପଣ ସାହିତ୍ୟ ସମାଜ କୁ ରୁଧଧିମନ୍ତ କରିଛନ୍ତି. ଇଶ୍ବର ଅପଣଂକ ଚଲା ବାଟକୁ କୁସୁମିତ କରନ୍ତୁ. ଏହା ହିଁ ମୋର କାମନା.

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Ayman Parray 04 September 2015

A beautiful title of what I am sure must be a lovely poem. I hope someone can translate the poem into English so that I am able to read.

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Bharati Nayak 05 September 2015

Thank you Ayman for your lovely words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 September 2015

Bahuta sundara kabitatie padhibaku milila. Apankara khub ucha kalpana rahichhi. Bhagabana karantu apanankara kalpana ahuri bardhita heu. Mate beshi bhala laguthiba pada hela...........Jete rangara shadhi Duhkha, raga, rosa, anadara, asahisnuta Sabu sadhi ku mu Sundara bhabare pindhi pakae. Thanks for sharing such intensive poem in oriya language. ......10

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Bharati Nayak 05 September 2015

Thank you for your nice and encouraging words.

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 September 2015

Bhagyare lekha thile emiti sundar kabita padhibaku mile.Bahut sundar.

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Bharati Nayak 05 September 2015

Apananku mora kabitati sundara lagithibara jani khub bhala lagila.Nija bhasare jete bele katha kahibara abasara mile, sethire khub antarangata bhari rahi thae.

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