Bows And Arrows Poem by Obed dela Cruz
Bows And Arrows
Bows and arrows work together.
One can’t work without the other.
Bows are used by men to target.
Arrows are used to hit target.
If the bows are like the fathers
And the arrows like the children,
Then it shall be a better world
If the User is the true God.
right. one is useless without the other. nice thought.
Neither the bows Nor the arrows Its only half we men And half another women Who render this world tobe still a world In spite of unending sorrows Despite todays bullying tomorrows Conceptualized well.I give you a tenner.
Again, don't stop here. Tell a story. There's so much more to write. Creativeness is the mark of a good writer so WRITE.
you seem to have stored wonderful ideas in your young head...you present them very well too...good piece...i liked...10
Hmmm... Obed... This is not bad at all. One of your better ones. Clear and to the point. Your grammar here is better, too.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Great Write! Cupid shot the arrow in the name of LOVE! I do NOT beleive GOD ever shot an arrow..But if he ever does! I hope it is in the name of GOOD! A-Men! Comment From K.R.E.