Brand New Love.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Brand New Love....

Rating: 5.0


What if someone lies to you?
What if that is really true?

What if that's your best friend now?
How must I feel then, yes how?

Why cannot we taste the fruits?
The fruits of true friendship?

Why cannot we taste good results?
The good results of true companionship?

Why must it always have a shipwreck?
A shipwreck because of wrong navigation.

Why all of a sudden sailing to unknown destinations?
Is that because of your sudden sensations?

These are all my questions, dear.
These are all so very new for me,
as they suddenly appear
We know that honesty is the best policy.

We possess an inner wealth
and therein much prosperous health

God hath given us much talent,
our prophecy is prominent
So my dear, please never lie
This is the First Week of Advent

My dear, why must it happen
Someone unknown to you has let it un-wrappin'

Why so many lines were no trophy?
My dear, our brand new love
has turned now a jalopy!



©Sylvia Frances Chan

A.D. Sunday the First Advent Week
The 2nd of Dec 2018-
@ 11.35 hrs. A.M. West-European Time

Brand New Love....
Sunday, December 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifespan,love,love and dreams,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
BRAND NEW LOVE....

Why so many lines were no trophy?
My dear, our brand new love
has turned now a jalopy!
©Sylvia Frances Chan

A.D. Sunday the First Advent Week
The 2nd of Dec 2018-
@ 11.35 hrs. A.M. West-European Time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2018

You are very true in expression. God is true friend of many of us. He guides us in right path by his grace. He sails our lives in right boat when we surrender to him. He has given us much talent. We shall recognize this and we shall use this in his service...10

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Valsa George 03 December 2018

Why must it always have a shipwreck? A shipwreck because of wrong navigation Sometimes people misunderstand us! It cannot be helped and we lose friends! However we are not to lose heart as we possess inner wealth. Even if life may not always give us what we expect, let us learn to use the inner wealth and be happy! The questions you have asked in this poem, I often ask myself too! A great write Sylvia! Top marks!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 December 2018

Thank you so much, you know too well about friends who share the same emotive feel, exactly, Valsa, most sympathetic responses here, thank you from my heart, also for your Top marks mentioned, Valsa. Truly most sympathetic.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 December 2018

Page now so jumpy, I will come back to give my reaction. T.Q.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2018

We possess an inner wealth! I just believe in this! The artificial things are just illusion! A very beautiful poem carrying a precious inbuilt message....10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 December 2018

Thank you for sharing with me the same belief in inner wealth, happy to know that you have read the message between the lines, Dillip. Thank you for the 10. G.B.U. abundantly with your beloved family. Amen.

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