Breakup Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Breakup

Rating: 5.0


When it happened last time
It wasn't the last time
We made up with each other
In our imagination

So it went on slightly longer
Than we had thought
Dry crisp words carried on
Without destination

It went on
As long as we were fooling ourselves
It ended abruptly
As we acquired wisdom.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 16 December 2022

Bitter truth, better realised. Awesome poem Wisely penned. Full *******

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Richard Wlodarski 12 December 2022

This very mature poem should be embraced by all as an antidote to War of the Roses. Wise beyond your years, Nosheen!

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Anjandev Roy 12 December 2022

Absolutely brilliant......thanks a lot.....

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Sandra Feldman 12 December 2022

Very direct and well written poem. It frankly looks at truth face to face. Not easy to embrace

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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