Broken Trust Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Broken Trust

Rating: 5.0


Now that trust is a cloth
Mended time and again
With patches sewn together
To keep the shape intact
Now that trust is a cracked glass
That can still hold water
But will not hold something warm
Or cold
Let's discard the cloth
And the glass
For now trust doesn't belong
To the conversations
Now trust is a used up tissue paper
Meant for the bin of memory.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 02 December 2022

'That can still hold water But will not hold something warm Or cold' - A deep, penetrating thought. Also love the last line: 'Meant for the bin of memory.'

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Pallab Chaudhury 02 December 2022

Wow! Beautifully penned one! Nice ending with the line 'Now trust is a used up tissue paper Meant for the bin of memory. Congrats!

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Fantastic poem. Trust is often compromised with even a tiniest breach, rebuilt (patched up) over time, re-earned. The metaphor of cloth fits in exactly.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 December 2022

I really love the last two lines especially Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 03 December 2022

Superb piece.........enjoyed it thoroughly....thank u...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 December 2022

Trust is compared to a piece of cloth which is mended time and again. Moreover the poetess feels it like a used tissue paper... Brilliant. The trust once broken can be mended but a crack remains there.

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Bharati Nayak 03 December 2022

It is so beautiful poem, Nosheen! It will go to my favorite list.Let me quote, 'Now trust is a used up tissue paper Meant for the bin of memory.'

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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