Breathe Poem by Rob Lamberton

Breathe

Rating: 5.0


Beneath the water
My drowned eyes long for air
Gasping in prayer
Finished ultra marathon
Mountain breathed into the sea

Breathe
Monday, January 2, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,sea,water
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Additional thought provoked by: Psalm 68: 22; Proverbs 3: 20-23; Romans 8: 26; Psalm 46: 1,2 Ezekiel 37: ; Mark 11: 23
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 03 January 2023

Your prayers were answered , your hard labour bore fruit! A lovely poem!

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Rob Lamberton 04 January 2023

A labor of faith based on sure promises! Thank you for commenting!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 August 2026

Prayers are our arms in conquering our difficult aims in life. ' Mountain breathed into the sea'... wonderful and thought provoking line from a beautiful poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 February 2024

My drowned eyes long for air gasping in prayer.....appreciated the inner meaning and depth of the poetic expression! Top marks

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Chandan Dey 18 January 2023

Creating positive energy; nice imagery. Thank you very much for sharing this poem wiith us.

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 January 2023

Faith at the time of adversity is powerful mantra tonsustain life. Beautifully written.

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Rob Lamberton 18 January 2023

Thank you for visiting this poem and for your positive comments!

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Rob Lamberton 17 January 2023

Thank you for reading and your affirming comment! I look forward to further exchange in the future!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 January 2023

I agree with Keilani totally Brtavo!

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Rob Lamberton 09 January 2023

Thank you for such kind and generous words!

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