Beneath the water
My drowned eyes long for air
Gasping in prayer
Finished ultra marathon
Mountain breathed into the sea
Faith at the time of adversity is powerful mantra tonsustain life. Beautifully written.
Thank you for visiting this poem and for your positive comments!
Thank you for reading and your affirming comment! I look forward to further exchange in the future!
I agree with Keilani totally Brtavo!
Thank you for such kind and generous words!
This poem breathes deep faith in The Almighty. Wonderful Bliss about God and all there IS
Faith also is a gift from God breathed into us! He is definitely worthy of all praise! !
Loved it. "drowned eyes' gasping in prayer.. and mountain breathing (life) into the sea… exquisite. Truly poetic way to reiterate the calamitousness of environmental degradation. Top score.
Thank you for your kind remarks, Unnikrishnan!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Creating positive energy; nice imagery. Thank you very much for sharing this poem wiith us.