Beneath the water
My drowned eyes long for air
Gasping in prayer
Finished ultra marathon
Mountain breathed into the sea
Prayers are our arms in conquering our difficult aims in life. ' Mountain breathed into the sea'... wonderful and thought provoking line from a beautiful poem.
My drowned eyes long for air gasping in prayer.....appreciated the inner meaning and depth of the poetic expression! Top marks
Creating positive energy; nice imagery. Thank you very much for sharing this poem wiith us.
Faith at the time of adversity is powerful mantra tonsustain life. Beautifully written.
Thank you for reading and your affirming comment! I look forward to further exchange in the future!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your prayers were answered , your hard labour bore fruit! A lovely poem!
A labor of faith based on sure promises! Thank you for commenting!