Breathtaking Poem by Rini Shibu

Breathtaking

Rating: 5.0


Smoky are her eyes
When he gaze into those
A cool wind blows
And he is iced
Strawberry are her lips
When she whispers
Musical strings vibrates
And  his heart resonates
Like cherries are her cheeks
When she smiles
Those dimples takes him to the peak
Shiny and bouncy is her hair
So soft and smooth
Which smells amazing
Just to stop his beats
He says her looks are breathtaking

Friday, March 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: girl
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 23 March 2018

Rini, such a lovely poem worthy of 10++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 24 March 2018

Ever So Beautifully Sweet And Romantic! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Rini Shibu 25 March 2018

Thanks Rebecca Navarre..! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2018

Which smells amazing! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 25 March 2018

Thanks Edward for visiting this poem.. Rini

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Lamar Cole 23 March 2018

This is a very wonderful and very enjoyable poem about breathtaking.

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Rini Shibu 23 March 2018

Thanks Lamar, glad to hear you enjoyed..! ! Rini

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Ravi Kopra 23 March 2018

continued - jhaDpher jaise us k gaal hain jab vo hansti hai to us k hilkoray usko ek pahaD par utha le jate hain us k phailay baal chamakte hain reshmi jaise mulayam hain khushboo se bhare hue hain jab vo usko dekhta hai us k dil main chaku lag jate hain aur vo kehta hai - usay dekhte hi dekhte mera saans bund ho jata hai

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Rini shibu 23 March 2018

Thanks Ravi..your Hindi version is marvelous

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Ravi Kopra 23 March 2018

continued - uske hont laal laal tamatar jaise hain laal laal cHaDpher se hain wo unko khana chahta hai jab wo bolti hai uska dil pigal jata hai sureeli ghantiaN bajne lag jati hain dil main sitar apne aap taron par suraiN bajati hai aur uske dil main hal chal machal jati hai

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