Brittle Crystal Poem by Rini Shibu

Brittle Crystal

Rating: 5.0


She worked hard for her dreams
And flowed with life's stream
She played different cards
Though it was tough and a little hard
she was beautiful and smart
With a brittle crystal heart
She loved everyone sincerely
And the crystal sparkled brightly

Monday, August 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: crystal,heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 30 August 2018

Just states that the beauty of a woman is not just skin-deep. It is the beauty of her soul that is expressed on her countenance

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 August 2018

A beautiful poem that captures the great character of a person. Heartwarming write well crafted and nice rhyme.10 +++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2018

she was beautiful and smart With a brittle crystal heart She loved everyone sincerely And the crystal sparkled brightly.......nice poetic expression. I love these lines. A lovely poem.

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Lamar Cole 27 August 2018

This is a very nice poem about Brittle Crystal.

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Michael Hopkins 27 August 2018

Lovely images in your poem. Well done.

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