Bri Edwards Acrostic Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Bri Edwards Acrostic

Rating: 4.9

Because he reminded me of how much I
Really enjoy acrostic poems,
I decided to write one just for him.

Even though he lives on the far side of the country,
Despite the fact that he's agnostic and I'm Christian,
We get along really well
And even could call ourselves 'friends'.
Recently I've realized that we are getting old.
Dang, it would be a real treat, if
Some day soon we could meet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 07 November 2023

kim, my tel. # is 1-888-LAF-RIOT. WE COULD MEET '1/2 WAY', ...SAY TENNESEE? ? ? : )

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Kim Barney 12 November 2023

I think Tennessee is more than halfway... for me. How about Evanston, Wyoming?

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2023

Kim, as you did not mention or violence or talking amphibians in your poem, I COULD NOT, in good conscience give 5 stars, but gave 4. bri

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 November 2023

A very heartwarming write, Kim and so well crafted acrostic. Top Marks!

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Kim Barney 18 November 2023

Dear Rose Marie, thank you very much!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 07 November 2023

Some day soon would be a boon if you could meet that big baboon ---- oops, I mean, you should really try to meet that nice guy!

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Kim Barney 12 November 2023

Baboon? Naw, he's more of a chump --- oops, I mean chimp.

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Belle Ringer 07 November 2023

Nice tribute to Bri. He's an OK guy.

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2023

p.s. Belle and Ron and maybe Wes, Kelly, and Valsa could join in the TV fun? ? ? ;)

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2023

'FRIENDS' i LIKE THAT. Pehaps Hollywood, NYC, or Paris, London, Delhi, or Tokyo would care to revive the TV show Friends, starring...US?

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