Bri's Seven Looooong Days….[ I Wanted To Submit A ‘ New ‘ Poem Anyway; Did I Already Announce My Latest Showcase? ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bri's Seven Looooong Days….[ I Wanted To Submit A ‘ New ‘ Poem Anyway; Did I Already Announce My Latest Showcase? ]

Rating: 4.5


It's been days since I received a poem comment, my my! *
But that's ok with me, and now I'll tell you all just why.
I've been a guest of Humboldt County, in their big jail;
scribbling a poem on a police car's window does not fail ….
to give a poet 7 free days lodging and even some food.
But, though the food was good, I feel the judge was quite
rude!

Btw **, did I send notices to Friends re my latest showcase?
October 26th my November showcase did show its face.


(November 10th2020)



*my my!

Interjection.
(dated)An extension of my! used to express surprise or pleasure


**by the way

phrase of way
1 - incidentally: (used to introduce a topic not directly connected with what was being spoken about previously) .

Tuesday, November 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: crime,fun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's too close to supper time to give a "story", and there ain't much to say anyway.

:)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 10 November 2020

Is this a poem dear poet or a writeup for poem? Neither I see any fun nor crime. Why waste your nd my time.

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Denis Mair 11 November 2020

I forgot to ask, did you use a bar of soap to write a poem on the police car's window?

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Quoth Theraven 13 November 2020

Bri, I hope they throw the book at you. A book of fine poetry. You lightened my load a little with this. QtR

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Denis Mair 14 November 2020

Could you please let us know what you wrote on the patrol car window? You only give us the first half of a juicy story, then you leave us hanging. This is too tantalizing... Now I'm going to lie awake wondering what you wrote. Whatever it was, it proves you have gumption. A 5 for mischievousness.

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Valentin Savin 25 December 2020

I can not understand what happened with my page on PH. I was asked to register anew with my email and password. I've done it. And now can't find my in and out post. All seem to be lost.

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Valentin Savin 15 December 2020

Bri, you're not a boy to be naughty. I wonder if it was a state car or a private car. I hope you didn't get a kick in the? I'm glad you got off well.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 December 2020

I enjoyed reading the comments of Valsa and Savita. So, you were in Humboldt country jail? ? ? We are curious to know what you wrote on the police car window. You were served free food and lodging. That's fine but sans your favourite ICE CREAM! Imagine Bri's plight! ! !

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Bri Edwards 13 December 2020

I did not scribble a poem, but NOW I HAVE: Bri's Seven Looooong Days….[ I Wanted To Submit A ‘ New ‘ Poem Anyway; Did I Already Announce My Latest Showcase? ]

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Valsa George 25 November 2020

What did you write on the car window of the cop that made you eligible for seven day's imprisonment in the notorious jail? Now I realize that poetry has untold impact on others. However, glad to know that you got good food there.... it being your top priority in life. Were you served any ice cream? That is not likely......! !

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Savita Tyagi 22 November 2020

May be you did not get any comments on Poemhunter page but I am sure you got plenty of verbal comments from fellow residents!

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