I'm standing
on the outside
looking down
People running round
trying to find their ground
But all they find
Is a government pound
Trying to make them
one of the crowd
Until they retire
Broken And Proud
You say when you need, you never tell except it have to share..there's no other way better than dissolve the real things in writing..as your writing is for us..feeding us with thinking...and Dave, you got nice pen with unlimited ink.. :) _Unwritten Soul
The poem nicely portrays the quality of life and plight of a common man in a modern society. People running round trying to find their ground
Ooh! So amazing, truely wonderful
Love it! never thought of it put like that before, and it has opened my eyes wider than they've ever been.
I like this poem. What an insight to the mediocrity of living...life is something more...and your poem makes us aware and feel it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
right there with you! strong, defiant poetry!