Broken Dreams Poem by lil island Gal
Broken Dreams
Oh, if I had a star to shine
For every broken dream of mine
The whole night sky would turn to day
And all my troubles melt away....
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I love you more than life itself
But Im afraid to love.
My heart is like the fragile wings
Of a tiny little dove.
I'm scared to get too close.
I feel that I can't win.
You'll love me for a little while
Then you'll set me free again.
I've lived so long on hopes and dreams
I don't know what to do.
I don't think I can trust my heart,
For it belongs to you.
I know you'll only hurt me
Yet, I still keep running back.
Between the paths of our hearts
There's a worn and beaten track.
You've got my heart held on a string.
Its breaking right in two.
Enough belongs to me -to hurt-
The rest belongs to you.
I know that somewhere in your heart
There is a place for me.
I just don't know how to find it
And there's no way to make you see.
I can only hope that someday
You'll wake up and you'll find,
That while my heart belongs to yours,
Yours, too, belongs to mine.
(inspiration: sadiqullah khan: : : : after reading his poem promises)
what about all those promises, commitments...he did? ? ? ? ? ?
P.S: i wish he could be there with me right now...... but he is NO MORE....
you have well defined a women in love. Tender feelings, some hesitation, shyness, , all together in a very beautiful poem.
broken dreams...........nice sad love poem......well penned.......
The person who's ur inspiration can be felt forever, be they with u or not. Its a challange which a few stand to accept and prove. Your poem tells about the seed in you. Now this lil girl has to grow into a full bloomed tree. You have a long way to go Superb writing.
nicely written with extreme passion... i'm sorry for wat ur goin thorugh... wats meant to be will happen. don't lose faith. xoxo~paris~xoxo
A poem with focussed mind :) A sweet first stanza........ dreamy atmosphere of sadness. 'You'll love me for a little while Then you'll set me free again' it seems you believed in the opinion that in love... no freedom! and again there is a heart felt piece.... 'You've got my heart held on a string. Its breaking right in two. Enough belongs to me -to hurt- The rest belongs to you' ..... and its end is also very nice, though it is a poem of sorrow but i feel it something very sweet! just TOUCHY! !
This is a very well written poem, lil Gal, and I liked how consistent your rhyming in it was. You certainly have a talent for poetic expression and displayed it quite well in this charming poem. Carl.
gud poem.............. i like this poem........ bht achi likhi hai....
a poem with passionate feelings of love.........sebastine
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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this is a beautiful poem! ...the ways you have described this love you have is sooooo well penned! ...a perfectionnist! ...keep wrting such beautiful pieces more...i would love to see them.. merry Xmas and a happy new year! NIA RIZ