Broken Promises Poem by lady grace

Broken Promises

Rating: 4.8


i learn to live in a lonely place
where hearts are cold and fools are fine...

i learn to live in restricted areas
where everything is known and identified...

i learn to live behind the wide ocean
where tears are invisible in the pouring rain...

i learn to live in emptiness
where innocence is lost in the face of wisdom...

i learn to live alone
where I can find nothing but my shadow
shadow of a lonely heart
from the promises that has been made...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Sb 02 January 2010

its beautiful... i totally loved >

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Ency Bearis 02 January 2010

strong determination to exist in this world......thats a person must be.... strong words... God Bless.....10

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Eyan Desir 02 January 2010

Children of earth all who walk this earth will fed with lies.. we live in shadows a simple fall breaks a glass

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fine poem.. well done.. emotion filled.

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Scott Creed 07 January 2010

wow... very moving. you have a talent...

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Ravi Sathasivam 12 January 2010

Again, you have written a beautiful poem. Well penned Well done. Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 January 2010

‘…i learn to live in emptiness // where innocence is lost in the face of wisdom...’ Indeed very much true and empathic mindset poets always pouring…as conscience…of society…well done… no it is well performed promise [wpp] 10 Ms. Nivedita UK Dear Poet, Unable to post message… By heart I invite you to my page…and grace by your comments.if you please… Regards niv

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Akram Awadat 11 January 2010

again you back with the beautiful poems lady grace great lines, thanks

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 January 2010

learn to live alone where I can find nothing but my shadow shadow of a lonely heart from the promises that has been made....................learn to live in silence, where heart riffles in rune of dream and awes suffers by the shadow of clods, vale of tears refrained to rain, wonderful write by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing sorry yet unable open my message box

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 January 2010

learn to live alone where I can find nothing but my shadow shadow of a lonely heart from the promises that has been made....................learn to live in silence, where heart riffles in rune of dream and awes suffers by the shadow of clods, vale of tears refrained to rain, wonderful write by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

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