Bug Naps Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Bug Naps

Rating: 4.9


Life as love loses color
Bird as time flies away
Memory as old foe—
Wood-mite eats night
Bug naps on the soul


Rains on the memory
Yesterday germinates
Plankton feelings—
Cruel catfish wakes up
Bug naps on the soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

very well said...bug naps on the soul...memory is souls enemy

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Ejaz Khan 27 June 2009

Don't let no bugs attack soul, a pleasant read like usual! From your side a beautiful write!

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

well..I don't what else to say..except these are all mind blowing! ! ! ! ! ...it s been two months since i came to the site...and you are a very unique writer indeed! ! ! ! 10+++ splendid one as always... regards shan

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true thoughts about the life and the world..well penned..wanted to live for one day in a poet's thought..10++++

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Catrina Heart 18 June 2009

Cruel catfish wakes up Bug naps on the soul ----- fabulous metaphors written...when conscience naps into the soul and the self love awakes...greediness takes over...now there'll be a laughing thunder! ! ! 10+++

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Callie Carroll 17 June 2009

Very interesting ideas, intriguingly stated.

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