Building A Strong Fence! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Building A Strong Fence!

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A beautiful tree
Stood in the mid of garden
By spreading its lovely shades
Gently clutch of dullness
Fenced in from all the sides.
Awfulness added further
Bloodsucker overpowered it.
The tree was
Strong enough to recover on its own...
When it had fence of strong will power
Parasites dared not to touch it.
Taking advantage of weakness
Leech Utilises all its ability to conquer it fully
So that tree is reduced to nil
By sucking all its strength of will power.

Day by day
completely dried with
Few leaves and branches
About to die..
No one knew what the problem was
Except the tree!

Unexpectedly a powerful light of sun
Went deep down the root of problems
Dig out the weakness
Sucked the poisonous parasites out of it
Chopped its negative hurdles
And that weakness was well manured
Drops of support and care from loved ones
Made it strong
And converted that dullness into its strength
Now tree stood more lively and powerful than before.

Wait for the time
Time heals everything
Though the scars remain
But it will remind us of the past
But once a person rise after great fall
Will keep his eyes open and
Watch his steps
Which will never let him fall Again!

Times is the best teacher for everything!

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 09 July 2013

A great poem, a lot can be healed over time, and what we learn from it can help us in life.

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Krunal Parmar 09 July 2013

wow its cool a great poem for poet recitation

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Vipins Puthooran 09 July 2013

Time heals everything Times is the best teacher for everything! The great two lines of this poem! ! ! ! Top marksss

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Akhtar Jawad 02 July 2018

Times is the best teacher for everything! Poetry is like silver and gold mended in ornaments that teach us how the natural beauty of humanity can be decorated. A lovely poem.

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Ramesh Rai 22 August 2016

Wait for the time Time heals everything Though the scars remain But it will remind us of the past But once a person rise after great fall Will keep his eyes open and Watch his steps Which will never let him fall Again! Times is the best teacher for everything! Most powerful and marvellous stanza. +10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 August 2014

Yes by erecting a strong fence we can protect and get ahead and time will assuage in course of time.........Geetha a great piece with a great message........

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Soumita Sarkar 13 July 2013

Exceptionally good.............life of a survivor who pulled h/her sol from the clutches of misery and gloom.............

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Wow, what a great poem from a great poet.

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