But You Did Not Let Me Poem by Little Sunshine
But You Did Not Let Me
I tried to see a good dream
But you did not let me
I tried to live in peace
But you did not let me
You just forced me to live in my imagination
And i didn't want to
The last line of your poem seems unnecessary. I think it would be better if you said, And it was so painful instead of And I didn’t want to.
special love a confluent. flow between two. both imagination are captured. u have expressed finely yr thoughts.......10+
that what is happening when you love someone you make all your life for him but he doesn't let you live or fell happy in this life. good work, nice poem
I touched your deception in this poem! ! ! short but soooooo emotional I felt it inside...
Short and to the point. Your tone of sadness exists as always...keep writing! (well done)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 10:13:15 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A sad poem, Sadly our dreams don't always come true... Andy