Butterfly Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Butterfly

Rating: 5.0


Im homeless
As wonderer as dandelion
Lead me, butterfly!
Over the rainbow gate
Where my lover lives
Among roses
Waiting for me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 14 May 2008

Your poems are rich in imagery from Nature. They are deep delved in mysticism of Coleridge with Wordworthian appeal.

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Cherry Zhai 05 April 2008

It's so beautiful. It's a fantastic dream. The images in this poem makes me see a picture.

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Prasanna Kumari 29 March 2008

i feel the love in your butterfly and rainbow...nice poem

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Lynda Robson 27 March 2008

A lovely romantic piece, full of imagery, a ten for this, Best wishes Lynda

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Tsira Goge 20 March 2008

You write very beautifully and romantically... Thanks, Tsira

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I love the imagery of a dandelion, butterfly and rainbow. It is simply a lovely poem. 10 Karin Anderson

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Lovely indeed! A passionate plea!

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Jihad T 20 January 2009

very nice what your pen has made

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What an absolutely beautiful poem. These few lines say so much in such a lyrical way. Do you know how spiritual butterflies are? I would eventually like my son to make a movie (he is a film maker) of the profound experience our family has had with a butterfly. This poem touched a special spot in my heart... Karin Anderson

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Sarah Abdullah 15 June 2008

Im homeless As wonderer as dandelion Such a Nice imagery Thx for sharing ^_^

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