Butterfly In Rose Garden Poem by Rini Shibu

Butterfly In Rose Garden

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Captivated by the charm
She flew towards the fragrance
On the dewy misty day
When she embraced the petals
the wings were shimmering more
She kissed it's beauty
and sang a song for it's nectar
She fluttered the wings
and showed the spectrum of colors
But the joy didn't last long
In pain she cried until noon
And she ended her life soon
Oh red roses what have you done
She was blind in your love
But your thorns pricked her to bleed

Butterfly In Rose Garden
Friday, June 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 22 June 2018

On bassant the butterfly flies over Arab sands, though misty days are rare...the butterfly in there, a good one!

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Kostas Lagos 22 June 2018

An astonishing poem, Rini.It is just brilliant!

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Lamar Cole 23 June 2018

Great poem about butterfly in rose garden.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 August 2022

A beautiful poem. Loved it.

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Narayana Aghalaya 09 October 2018

there is no such thing as free lunch. A price has to be paid. Brought out beautifully in this poem!

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 July 2018

Hi Rini, It is true. She was blind in your love But your thorns pricked her to bleed “ But rose without thorns is spring without fragrance......

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 June 2018

you asked who is this man ]]]]? ? ? ROSE WITHOUT THORNS FRAGRANCE TO THE CORE AND to none does he belong except the faithful they have themselves to prove can you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2018

Oh red roses what have you done She was blind in your love But your thorns pricked her to bleed......touching expression with nice theme. A brilliant poem on butterfly nicely executed. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Thank u dear Rini.

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