By The Riverside Poem by Rini Shibu

By The Riverside

Rating: 5.0


He took her for a walk by the riveside
Whispered to her you are my bride
The moon kissed the glistening streams
And he sang a song about his dreams
She uttered nothing but it was crystal clear
And the spark from heart drew them near
She looked into his eyes filled with love
And they flew to the cloud like doves

Sunday, November 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 November 2017

An excellent write with great rhyme. Love holds us spellbound.

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Rini Shibu 27 November 2017

Thanks Rose for posting your feedback

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

The moon kissed the glistening streams And he sang a song about his dreams ................................................................. She looked into his eyes filled with love And they flew to the cloud like doves.....fantastic expression with romance and dreams. Beautifully crafted. Thank u Rini for sharing this lovely poem.10

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Thanks a lot Kumar for posting your feedback

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 November 2017

Hi Rini, Beautiful poem on love, care and of course, dreams. Wonderfully written, verily enjoyable. A 100+++

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Thanks Unnikrishnan for reviewing.. Your words encourages me a lot

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Lamar Cole 26 November 2017

This is a very beautiful and enjoyable poem about by the riverside.

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Thanks Lam your words mean a lot to me

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2017

Very entertaining and exciting poem Rini, enjoyed the splendid poetic expression! I would love to quote: She looked into his eyes filled with love/And they flew to the clouds like a dove…Your poem depicts love and dreams in utter sumptuousness…Fascinating little poem…10/10

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Thanks Dillip for reading and commenting

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