Can You Believe! ! ! Poem by Compton Wright

Can You Believe! ! !

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Can you believe from the all the hard work
I put into winning your heart finally came true
As when I’m stress I close my eyes to ease my mind
You don’t understand how I feel when I’m around you
You take me to another place of my soul warms my body
Where I can restore the broken pieces of my heart
I think you are my last piece of this broken heart of mine
You even make my day when you say “I love you”

Can you believe from all the guys she could of pick
She chose me for her love, her lovely loverboy
After weeks turn to months she told me that
She’s ready for me we make love with sweet passion
Each kiss counted, each stroke meet it’s target
I loved every minute as I savored her taste of her body
We started from minutes to hours of making love
It was amazing for the both of us it was an experience
For us to remember for the ages and beyond our lives
Past on for us for this world but we will dancing on the clouds
With the angels giving our wings and our halos
So you will finally see why you are so perfect
When she was handed her harp and I saw her
From my dreams, my fantasies, my foreseeing lover
Now can you believe?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laila lili 11 January 2009

well for the beliving i can do that but i can imagine that great and wonderful words Laila Lili

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Kiona Pearson 29 November 2008

I sure can believe! Very nice. Pretty well written, too. I enjoyed it.

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Alexander Hale 28 November 2008

very well penned. thanks for sharing.

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So true.. I have been there before.. Great work Krista

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<font color =fusha>Amy 23 November 2008

this is really good you have talent my friend thanks for sharing

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