Compton Wright

Rookie - 87 Points (Washington DC)

Can’t Let You Go! ! ! - Poem by Compton Wright

Couldn’t face the facts that just looking at you bring memories
Maybe from the way she smiles or from the glow I see her from a far
But now that glow starting to darken as time goes through us
Thinking I got rid of her when I got my new lover by my side
But there you were in front of me remembering the reason why I loved you
Maybe I should step away from you or be in another lifetime
Where you never existed in my mind or my lips touched yours

Finally life was so sweet and beautiful in my eyes and heart
I prayed for this day to happen as the dark past started to end
And my new present of a new man began among the world
But still visions, dreams and flashback shown you and me
Like we were met for each other together and forever in love
Inside the golden locket it said bringing a tear out of my eye seeing this
Was my first goal for the both of her and I but heart broken I was
She didn’t felt a thing but sheer cold depression in her eyes
As this only eats me inside while showing a fake smile

Only shown as a true friend but in my heart saw her as a fallen lover
We live our moment of love and gave it a shot but failed at it
Now my friends are having turns with you like a toy to be played
She smiles at me but I swear I can hear her soul screaming and pledging
For help as if she knew I was going to jump in to save her but yet I turned away

Only to better her and myself in the long road but can I forget about her?
She’s a part of me inside his heart of mine so with that said let me rip
This mere mortal’s heart of love that’s now plagued with pain and sorrow
And transfer an new freshly one like having a second chance at love
So maybe I could finally let her go and move on to my lover’s world


Comments about Can’t Let You Go! ! ! by Compton Wright

  • Hilton Ball (7/29/2011 10:00:00 AM)

    just broke up with mine and it does feel that way and moving on is easy till i see her then its back to reality for her and me but this poem spoke loud to me
    akilleas p sideous over and out
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  • Tanvi DamleTanvi Damle (1/22/2010 12:29:00 AM)

    itz so so beautiful! ! wow...realli loved it! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Young One (9/23/2009 4:38:00 PM)

    this was amazing, really great. keep it up mr universe, haha, (Report)Reply

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  • Justice For All (4/19/2009 9:15:00 AM)

    very nice poem 10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Tyease CollinsTyease Collins (4/16/2009 4:46:00 PM)

    This is so....sweet and romantic......i love it =]


    -Tyease
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  • Laporche Holmes (4/13/2009 6:32:00 PM)

    great poem. keep up the great work! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Tiffany Border (4/10/2009 6:07:00 PM)

    nto much to say bout this

    amazing
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  • Honest Heart (4/8/2009 4:42:00 PM)

    wooooooooow! ! ! ....it's really unbelievable.....it's touching....very significant.....I really like the way that the word flow on! ! ...keeeeeeeeeeep on writing your wonderful poems :) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, July 29, 2011


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