Candle At Your Grave Poem by Rini Shibu

Candle At Your Grave

Rating: 5.0


I felt the wetness when I placed
The flaming candle at you grave
The smell of wild lillies took me back
to the time we spend together
Your memories will never fade
Because the eternal light you lit
will everglow in my heart
But the endless tears
Is trying to blow the blaze
If I say you to go far away to the sky 
and shine brighter among the stars
Twinkling at me from afar
Will you be happy if I say
Shall I live life once again
But we shall meet again
When there is no more pain
And I will come to your grave

Wednesday, February 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 07 February 2018

Poignant but beautiful. Love n loss make up an important part of human life. A sad yet lovely illustration.

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Rini Shibu 07 February 2018

Thanks Nosheen for your comment !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 August 2022

Excellent poem. Thanks for sharing...5 stars

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 February 2018

Hi Rini, Very emotionally worded poem. Touchingly rendered. A 100++

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Rini Shibu 09 February 2018

Glad to see you comenting..

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 February 2018

A really heart touching poem crafted with so much care and delicacy. Thanks Rini for the sharing .

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 February 2018

The beautiful memories of our departed loved ones will always glow in the deepest part.of our hearts. A beautifully crafted poignant write.10

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Rini Shibu 08 February 2018

Thanks Rose..! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 February 2018

Very very touching. Beautifully presented. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 08 February 2018

Thanks kumar for visiting this poem.! !

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