Catch Me When I Fall Poem by Aqua Flower

Catch Me When I Fall

Rating: 5.0


A rolling ball
catch me when I fall
bouncing all around
lost and not found
jumping off a cliff
wind blows against my flesh
you would never catch me
because you're so selfish

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Saturday, March 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: relationships,selfish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 09 March 2019

I must second what Kostas and Savita have said. You can feel the emotional let down in your poem.

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Kostas Lagos 09 March 2019

Powerful poem! Loved the closing line

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Savita Tyagi 09 March 2019

To catch someone at the time of fall is a compassionate learning we can use and install. Good poem thanks for sharing Aqua Flower.

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