Celebration Poem by Ayi Escalona

short and sweet, very nice

interesting piece, , .thanks

Verse seems to convey varied celebrations - some silent, some reverberating; I join the celebration and singing of hymns on the Saviour for an ever-lasting peace & happiness. Well done. thanks.

I like the double meaning created by the metaphors in lines 1- 3 and line 5. 1. Could this mean that it is paradoxical that what the saviour came to erase (misdeeds) is instead taking place on the very annivesary of his birthdate (bombs - suggestive of brutal human destruction) ? 2.Could this also mean the grandeur way in which Christians decide to remind themselves of the wonderful Saviour who decided to give His precious life to set free the apparently sinful and insignficant man so that (he) man may not perish but have eternal life? Whatever the meaning, Ariel Escalona has done wonderful penwork in amalgamating ideas with words to produce this grandeur piece.

Nicely put, i probably could not have put it better myself, donch know? A tenner fer sure(as they say, down in the valley in California.) God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

This poem is all about hope for a lost world. A wonderful message. Thanks.

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wow very enjoyable, i loved the imagery in the beginning. Nice piece. Sydney

Fine reminder of what Christmas is all about. good write

An interesting, well-written read. Glad I stumbled up on it.