The day is gone leaving scattered emblems
Of once picturesque skies
A cool shadow, flickers of gold
Shimmering beauty captured in vast thoughts
I sit motionless dazed to the sheer wonder
A perfect backdropp of my outspoken desire
While my heart sings tireless rhythm
My thought leaped a thousand miles
Faster than beams of relentless sun
Trudging through the thick yet fading clouds
Surging up powerful emotions
To cheer the early night’s gloomy disposition
Night is approaching
But my eyes can’t easily give in
To the long night’s departure
As countless words come so easily
I listened to your heartbeat from a thousand miles
Heard your laughter every time you smile
For in my deepest thoughts you linger…
The very thirst of my soul to begin
Its wasn't so bad to be foolish sometime, another great write thank you dear Kapatid.
I can well relate to this... Its beautiful how you put it 'listened to your heartbeat from a thousand miles Heared your laughter every time you smile... Thanks for sharing
Hi, seems you refer this to a cyber heart desire. At times I feel tthe same, no wonder we are poets! Nice!
I love this poem. You portray your loves longing so well with this beautifully written piece.10 from me.
wonderful composition shared here Ariel....sorry it took me awhile to read your stunning poetry.....Love it!
Very Nice, Ariel... The Day Is Gone, Leaving Scattered Emblems... Brilliant Line! and then you go on to show all the little things that was observed for the day and how life settles in continuing on in each heartbeat of hope... I Enjoyed the Read... MoonBee
really wonderful... nice thoughts... love can conquer all distance can never hinder if heart beats for it... may it be a foolish heartbeat...its Love... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia
Con la moral corregimos los errores de nuestros instintos y con el amor corregimos los errores de nuestra moral.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
awww, thats a power of love...thanks for sharing.