ramesh rai

Gold Star - 25,747 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Celestial Love - Poem by ramesh rai

I behold in thy love
flowing over bank of my soul
I seduce myself to my hermitage
to stay in blank space

Thy love is Celestial Empire
So, I fear to be ignored
But I know, thy love will not stop
how many times shall I ignore

Why do you give me so love
which I can not possess in my soul
A dropp of thy love is much more
that can drawn my entire soul.


Comments about Celestial Love by ramesh rai

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (7/8/2016 6:42:00 AM)


    Outstanding poem...Specially the philosophical touch you gave to it...10++++
    Thy love is Celestial Empire
    So, I fear to be ignored
    But I know, thy love will not stop
    how many times shall I ignore
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  • Akhtar Jawad (7/6/2016 10:40:00 AM)


    A beautiful and thoughtful poem............................................. (Report) Reply

  • Anita Sehgal (6/4/2012 6:22:00 AM)


    soft.. music for the soul. (Report) Reply

  • Nontobeko Dlamini (6/3/2012 4:05:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem. The metaphor '...Thy love is Celestial Empire...' Like China was, this love is so powerful and dominating, it is overwhelming. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (6/2/2012 9:34:00 AM)


    Love is celestial empire. nice. (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2012 1:12:00 PM)


    The last two lines are the essence of this poem.God bless.M. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (5/30/2012 1:39:00 AM)


    Divine love in divine write.Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (5/29/2012 11:13:00 PM)


    A glittering around your soul create a fantastic poem here, such a beautiful touch..keep writing! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • (5/29/2012 4:25:00 AM)


    A really beautiful poem, like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 28, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 23, 2012


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