Celestial Love Poem by ramesh rai

Celestial Love

Rating: 5.0


I behold in thy love
flowing over bank of my soul
I seduce myself to my hermitage
to stay in blank space

Thy love is Celestial Empire
So, I fear to be ignored
But I know, thy love will not stop
how many times shall I ignore

Why do you give me so love
which I can not possess in my soul
A dropp of thy love is much more
that can drawn my entire soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 01 June 2012

The last two lines are the essence of this poem.God bless.M.

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Dave Walker 29 May 2012

A really beautiful poem, like it.

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Unwritten Soul 29 May 2012

A glittering around your soul create a fantastic poem here, such a beautiful touch..keep writing! _Unwritten Soul

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Neela Nath Das 30 May 2012

Divine love in divine write.Very nice.

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M Asim Nehal 08 July 2016

Outstanding poem...Specially the philosophical touch you gave to it...10++++ Thy love is Celestial Empire So, I fear to be ignored But I know, thy love will not stop how many times shall I ignore

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Akhtar Jawad 06 July 2016

A beautiful and thoughtful poem.............................................

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Anita Sehgal 04 June 2012

soft.. music for the soul.

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Nontobeko Dlamini 03 June 2012

Beautiful poem. The metaphor '...Thy love is Celestial Empire...' Like China was, this love is so powerful and dominating, it is overwhelming.

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Gajanan Mishra 02 June 2012

Love is celestial empire. nice.

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