Chains Of Life On Me Poem by Edward Kofi Louis
Chains Of Life On Me
Chains of life on me! ! !
Gains lost to the wind;
Birds free to fly but, i cannot flly!
In pains i do walk,
In pains i do work,
In pains i do sleep.
Borders all around me! !
With tears very deep in my heart;
No grain no rain!
Negative attitudes all around me on earth;
But, they cannot drain my positive works! ! !
For the support of mankind.
To board the train daily to work,
Hard work in the name of my pains! !
The glory of which i have to help my people;
No pain no gain!
Rains gone away for me to accept the dry land.
My steps with pains!
My life with pains! !
Day after day to gain my ways across the borders;
But the negative attitudes seen every day cannot drain my positive works.
One day at a time!
One step at a time! !
Time and times to face my life;
On earth with the pains of life! ! ! !
All around with the chains of hatred and war!
Taking postive strides to gain my status.
Chains of life on me! ! ! !
With pains to go along with;
All these chains!
All these pains! ! ! ! !
But with positive morals able to move forward;
Tears much hidden in the heart!
Step by step to meet another day;
The way too long ahead of mankind.
A great well weaved poem about: pain, lessons of life, struggle, survival, realistic, tears, hardships, I so fully understand and have absorbed your excellent poem about the heavy life you must face. TOP Score, dear Edward. Brilliant poem
Thank you so much for sharing this amazing great poem, dear Edward. God's Blessings be greatest.
well and woe are the reversing chain of life! nice to read you after a long time
This poem is among the Best Members Poems list continuously since the day it was published on PoemHunter. Great achievement. Congratulations
Pains of life… great. Profound poem. Congratulations too. This poem ranks #62 in the Best Member Poems list on PoemHunter for
Today this brilliant poem is ranked as number 70 as The Best Member Poems of Member Poets. CONGRATS dear Edward.
Love the touch of positiveness in the poem. Thats how life sums up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I have read your poem with very much attention, I understand the theme of the brillian t poem about the pains and chains of life. It is indeed so very difficult if one is the one who must earn for his living and for the rest. Especially when the rains do not yet appear, so very difficult.