Hello lovely kid,
You may always lead,
May you become head,
Books more you read,
You are always future,
Ideas good you nurture,
Learn always you best,
And pass the entire test,
When you are child,
Some times get wild,
Lessons make you mild,
More friends you find,
When you enter school,
Remain you always cool
No one can tell you fool,
Ideas may you have full,
Pick up here you more,
Try to form a core,
Never had you seen before,
Fun you get galore,
Here is holy place,
Challenge you may face,
Accept it with grace,
Love and more embrace,
Try and learn more,
Content not with less,
Steep may be ladder,
Path may be harder,
Neither get afraid,
Not you get laid,
Obey what is said,
More attention paid,
You always look forward,
And not fall backward,
Body soul you purge,
Look ahead and surge
fully captures childhood, which i myself have all rights to say(:
A very enlightening poem.. i appreciated the manner in which you ordered around conventional words of wisdom of which you do so well. this is a 10+++, too
Hello lovely kid, You may always lead, This is a lovely template for a school classroom it is full of steps for the right path great work here! ++++++++10 regards hasmukh
Yes sir, I totally agree with you! A value laden piece of work!
You have very good, very wise thoughts, Hasmukh. As a native English speaker, I would suggest not trying too hard to force rhymes though. Your thoughts and feelings stand well enough on their own. Thank you for sharing your poem, Sir. Peace.
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I would like to translate this poem
Oh kid! “Neither get afraid, Not you get laid, Obey what is said, More attention paid, ” Nice thoughts… if only our young ones will be guided the most, this in-turn will be realized for sure.