Explore Poems GO!

Child's Sleep Complaint (The Moonlight Serenade)

Rating: 5.0
the moon
seems very loud
tonight
I need a cloud
to put out the light
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
COMMENTS
Alison Cassidy 09 January 2008
Gentle little epigram. I agree with Ez, it certainly could have been written by Spike. The sky is full of holes to let the rain in but the holes are very small that's why rain is thin. Clever lad. I love it. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
1 0 Reply
Great. Don't know why but it reminded me of Spike Milligan. Ez
1 0 Reply
Jerzegirl *~~ 10 June 2006
still one of my favorites............................
1 0 Reply
Dee Daffodil 01 May 2006
Chuck, Awwww....this one was sweet, very touching. Hugs, Dee
1 0 Reply
R H 13 April 2006
Sweet and simple, I love this! Warm wishes, Justine.
1 0 Reply
Lea Simpson 27 February 2006
Chuck, Chuck, Chuck. Shit hot, as ever.
1 0 Reply
Elya Thorn 26 January 2006
Beautiful, great metaphores! Elya Thorn
1 0 Reply
Mary Nagy 10 January 2006
A beautiful image! Sincerely, Mary
1 0 Reply
Linda Hepner 04 January 2006
You have caught the purity of a child before they are messed up with imposed language!
1 0 Reply
Stewart Mckenzie 03 January 2006
They say that poets are seven times as likely to be synaesthetic I wonder if synaesthetes are seven times as likely to be poets
1 0 Reply

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

6/14/2021 1:25:21 PM # 1.0.0.623