Chuck Audette

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Children And Their Sense Of Timing - Poem by Chuck Audette

Mother is counting to ten again
but that is just fine
'cuz I know to go when
she gets to number nine!


Comments about Children And Their Sense Of Timing by Chuck Audette

  • Bethany Buhl (7/17/2008 12:19:00 PM)


    Yeah my mom used to count to ten when i was younger and I always ran when she got to one cause I thought it was funny and now I wished that I would just listened to and not be so bad. (Report) Reply

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  • (7/18/2007 10:45:00 AM)


    Yes you are right. A beautiful poem indeed. (Report) Reply

  • (4/18/2007 1:02:00 AM)


    Chuck,
    It would seem that you could stay out of trouble that way,
    ... BUT, you didn't help,
    ... or maybe you tried to help too much,
    ... and silly you - - - you thought that you could win!
    ... What were you thinking?

    B.V.A.
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  • (1/23/2007 9:28:00 AM)


    Chuck, Mine know that I only go as high as 1-2-3 and then they better be doing whatever they refused to do in the first place...lol
    Just wait...your turn is coming...hehe
    Hugs,
    Dee
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  • Tailor Bell (10/7/2006 12:13:00 PM)


    depends on the infraction...you know...nine and half, nine and three quarters, nine and... fun read. -Tailor (Report) Reply

  • (7/23/2006 9:44:00 AM)


    Kids will do that if you let them... I never counted with my kids.

    dan
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  • (7/17/2006 10:04:00 PM)


    you are a genius! ! ...how many times in my life have i counted and have been counted at! ! ...well...now the mother in me counts again...CHUCK...I AM at 3...GET your pen READY and WRITE another fabulous poem! ! ! ...by the way did you hear the loud applause? ...and the 10 dropping in your kitty? ...love...nalini (Report) Reply

  • (7/17/2006 7:35:00 PM)


    How come it's always the boys who need the count down? Wait, I take that back... Cute write and a worthy transfer from PIM. More? ! Est : ] (Report) Reply

  • Ernestine Northover (7/17/2006 11:24:00 AM)


    Have you ever thought there might be a 'second' count to ten after this one. If not what's she going to do?
    Love Ernestine XXX
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  • (7/17/2006 10:21:00 AM)


    Mine now wait til I get to nine and three quarters! From a pim? ? A deserving 9 at the very least! Justine :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 17, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 17, 2010


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