Circle Of Life.......Montage Poem by saadat tahir

Circle Of Life.......Montage

Rating: 5.0


Fuzzy memoirs of the gone pasts
Rigged up sails atop the masts
Skipped and ambled on the ways
Did the schools and the plays

Hung from branches of an elm
Boohooed those that stood at helm
Stole some moments on the sly
Brooked no query nor the why

I so strong brimming young
Earth the moon both too sung
Awe-inspiring among the beaus
Silent innocent comely cues

She so full of life an verve
I so cheeky and the nerve
Hand in hand on snow or sand
Cast no eyes on fleeting land

Pitter patter of the little feet
Lulling softly our heart beat
Ballet of red yellow brown an green
Had a princess turned to queen

Pendulum’s tap a silent tick tock
Deceitful dalliance of wind sock
Stunned the mirror on that day
As the heathen reflected grey

A day then came the bell rang
Waved a curtain to stop the clang
There A young man stood in hurry
Sir here I am to take your worry

The cap he’d tilted to the side
Caught an eye of his gleaming ride
What brings you here o lanky lad
Umm! Sir I suppose you the dad

Slowly she walked to my side
Looked him over with eyes wide
Air was tense an the world swam
Touched his cap an bid her ma’am

I hope you will approve and bless
I’v bought for her a beautiful dress
She pat my shoulder, had me calm
With poise then she said a psalm

An then I grasped the circle of life
Bid them well and Held my wife

(Islamabad)
(May 08,2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 12 July 2009

A well composed poem with nice rhythm and rhyme.

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Toni Bellanger 06 June 2009

I was drawn to this poem by the word montage in the title. Very original. Quite a story.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Enchanting poem,10++

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Ejaz Khan 22 May 2009

Circle of Life is a poem of incredible beauty, with both depth and flow, I congratulate you on writting this lovely piece.10++++ without any hesitation.

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tara star 22 May 2009

lovely write.....good compostion as well, thnx 4 sharing

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Yasmin Khan 03 February 2013

' a single pictorial composition' with angles all beauful....''air tense and world swam''- a thoughtful paradox

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Amina Kamran 04 December 2009

truly a mind blowing poem.

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Ritty Patnaik 28 July 2009

dear saddat, loved this poem about you! so you took a full circle, to have her next to you? last two lines were realy good. ritty

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'Pendulum’s tap a silent tick tock Deceitful dalliance of wind sock Stunned the mirror on that day As the heathen reflected grey' Indeed nice dr. sakti.

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Kranthi Pothineni 15 July 2009

Well I knew how it feels. Nice write.

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