if you go behind the clouds
and you’ll see the fireflies’ lamp
you will see the bottle of tears
lock inside the terrors hearts.
use not the power of bullets
but the power of mind
use not the influence
but the honest lies
cross the bridges without fears
dropp your body on the brook
hide yourself in the desert
peace the objective and the purpose.
it’s maybe a long road
to return for peace of confusion
but the soul, heart and the shoulder
are you, no other but you.
you should learn like a river
and shine like a sun
you should fly like an eagle
wake the resting mind
as you soar to the sky
where nations laid unaware
pour your unending blessings
to pedestrians, human, and mankind.
WOW WHAT A POEM! IT'S PEARLESS AND I FEEL THAT YOU ARE REALLY AN INBORN POETESS. YOUR VERSIFICATION SUPERB.
Wow! This is terrific...I love the lines in the first and the second stanza, beautifully worded. I never thought that you could write such pretty lines.I didn't make a mistake to choose you as one of my favorites. Great write Lady, applause 10+
the cover we wear 'civilized' is made of blood and tears.........
I like the way this poem makes one ponder... This was poetic and well crafted a work of a master mind
‘peace the objective and the purpose.’…world needs much…Nature teaches in myriad ways but we’re blindfolded…self created…when will come GOK …POK? Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 [for peace] - GOK = God only know POK = Poet only knows n
This is excellent. It's wonderful to find a beautiful poem but also full of deep ideas.
You fluent like a river, very true werite Grace you are wonderful in description.......10++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very well inspired naidz...we do have a lot to learn from nature especially a peaceful stature...very well done