Civilized Poem by lady grace

Civilized

Rating: 5.0


if you go behind the clouds
and you’ll see the fireflies’ lamp
you will see the bottle of tears
lock inside the terrors hearts.

use not the power of bullets
but the power of mind
use not the influence
but the honest lies

cross the bridges without fears
dropp your body on the brook
hide yourself in the desert
peace the objective and the purpose.

it’s maybe a long road
to return for peace of confusion
but the soul, heart and the shoulder
are you, no other but you.

you should learn like a river
and shine like a sun
you should fly like an eagle
wake the resting mind

as you soar to the sky
where nations laid unaware
pour your unending blessings
to pedestrians, human, and mankind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 September 2009

very well inspired naidz...we do have a lot to learn from nature especially a peaceful stature...very well done

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Sanjib Das 04 September 2009

WOW WHAT A POEM! IT'S PEARLESS AND I FEEL THAT YOU ARE REALLY AN INBORN POETESS. YOUR VERSIFICATION SUPERB.

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Noel Horlanda 04 September 2009

Wow! This is terrific...I love the lines in the first and the second stanza, beautifully worded. I never thought that you could write such pretty lines.I didn't make a mistake to choose you as one of my favorites. Great write Lady, applause 10+

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premji premji 04 September 2009

the cover we wear 'civilized' is made of blood and tears.........

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Eyan Desir 03 September 2009

I like the way this poem makes one ponder... This was poetic and well crafted a work of a master mind

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 11 June 2010

‘peace the objective and the purpose.’…world needs much…Nature teaches in myriad ways but we’re blindfolded…self created…when will come GOK …POK? Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 [for peace] - GOK = God only know POK = Poet only knows n

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Patti Masterman 02 October 2009

This is excellent. It's wonderful to find a beautiful poem but also full of deep ideas.

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Ravi Sathasivam 14 September 2009

An inspiring poem. Beautifully written. Enjoyed Thanks

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Rafique Farooqi 12 September 2009

You fluent like a river, very true werite Grace you are wonderful in description.......10++++++++

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Raj Arumugam 11 September 2009

brilliant....insightful...powerful...

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