! Classic Encyclopedia! Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! Classic Encyclopedia!

Rating: 3.0


Beyond dreams an underlying truth
bewilders relevance of existence and there
a sun shines to dawn with unique rays of hope
to subside shadows of disappointments

Beneath the shore of uncanny waves,
a pain erupts to create another assault on
feeble shore, but sun sets there
with full control on wings of earth

Night there twinkles on valiant stars in sky
ornamented with flowers so full of fragrance
silvery moon light beckons its arrival
when mother earth eventually turns on its orbit

Besides one weeping crowd a life ends in silence
cries aloud in shatter but amidst of anguish
a birth fills the vacuum recreating rays
in abundance to a new found inner surprise

There forms a circle with ends and beginning not
translucent to dissect or to define in a manner
clear and understandable format and on the whole
mystery in one enigmatic concealed package called life

Only truth prevails on proven classified theories
and universe plainly smiles away at the helplessness
of its own very inmates their strange uneasiness and turns
pages of mystic theories on its classic encyclopedia




August 6,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 16 August 2008

poem very good...much insight there...the second and fourth stanzas in particular reveal a lot on the myth of life...ten grade

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 15 August 2008

An exceptionally good work with deep philosphical understanding and portrayal of bare truth.Words and metaphors are aptly placed to give it an excellent imagery. good work. my 10

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Indira Babbellapati 09 August 2008

the fullness of life in a collage!

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Indira Renganathan 08 August 2008

'Mystery in one enigmatic concealed package called life......classic encyclopedia'..wonderful.Touching truth.Extraordinary write reflecting the real life10and many more stars

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Onelia Avelar 06 August 2008

I like your concept about that classic encyclopedia and especially the last stanza...'and universe plainly smiles away at the helplessness of its own very inmates...' The smiling universe, turning pages of mystic theories on its classic encyclopedia...so vivid, animated image. Classy! (o.a.)

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