Desire is fire, so too is lust
He says, he lost his heart in her love
Fire flies sport around in rounds
Unaware of their downfall in cold life
Desire is fire! Well said! A beautiful little poem dear madam! (10)
desire//love/life/are interwoven in each other subject to the way they are reshuffled/or reset by fresh norms of seeing/all have been beautifully and poetically juxtaposed/and many conclusion can be drawn by each PH poet/reader
A poem with a profound message. desire is fire. When desire turns to greed what will be that like? One can imagine. Very much thought provoking, indeed. Thanks for sharing. X
Desire is just like fore and this burns life. Sometimes desires bring downfall. But love is power to revive life. Cold life amazes mind entirely. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A thought provoking poem. A succinct write yet so profound. Well crafted write.10+++