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Rating: 5.0

Stark, empty days and nights
Sadness has made nests in the trees
Despair is crying in the cuckoo's trill
My vision is stuck within four walls
What color is the sky, I don't know
Where art thou? I don't know
All is amiss, nothing is in place
From the flowers to the dreams
All have lost their color
Come and flow like a stream

To fill the emptiness within me
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Sunday, April 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,sadness,wait
Akhtar Jawad 30 January 2019

A nice gratitude to another nice poetess.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 May 2016

Come and flow like a stream! ! Nice piece of work.

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Edmund Strolis 01 May 2016

How to convey the stark, raw and open, deafening silence. A black and white inner and outer world. Those familiar things, the sky, depth, color, joy are all a strange reality in this personal space. Waiting for it to be filled by a breeze, a stream. To be blown awake and submerged once again in a colorful world...............the wait.

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Aarzoo Mehek 30 April 2016

Come and flow like a stream To fill the emptiness within me Come and blow like the breeze To sweep away the clouds of sorrow Hope, Eternal wait for the love of life and to be loved...so many emotions encapsuled in this beautiful poem.100++++ chale bhii aao mire jiite-jii ab itnaa bhii na intizaar baDhaao ki niind aa jaa.e Mahshar Inayati

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Valsa George 25 April 2016

All the images used speak of a pervading gloom! Powerful diction, Nosheen!

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Barry Middleton 24 April 2016

I love this poem. Perfect images of love that has drifted away and how we long for its return. A 10!

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Nosheen Irfan 24 April 2016

Thank you Barry. I have tried to copy you a bit here. Sweep away the clouds is the expression borrowed from you. Thank u for inspiring n appreciating Barry.

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Kelly Kurt 24 April 2016

The longing to be loved and love in return is poignantly portrayed here.

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Nosheen Irfan 24 April 2016

Thank you kelly.

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