Come Out, Feel Free Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Come Out, Feel Free

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weird the time
no one hears the outcry of strange prisoners!
not even God
yes, God also shuns the pious of every holy place
it's for the virus!
no; yes, no one knows it fully!
hearing to hearing; hearsay story jails everyone
o yes; this year is not free from it; perhaps not the next year and by this way…….
weak mind won't be ever free from its clutch; yes


so, come out; breathe the fresh air of the beach and natural earth
feel free fully; be independent
don't give your mind others to control from beyond the curtain or remote…




01.05.2020 Chattogram

Tuesday, June 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: encouragement,mind,panic
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From my comment on "Great Change" poem by Oskar Hansen 6/1/2020 3: 53: 00 AM
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 June 2020

SAD YOU DID NOT LIKE MY MOONY POETRY IT WAS FUN ONLY I WILL REMOVE IT IF U WISH MB OF BD

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 June 2020

so, come out; breathe the fresh air of the beach and natural earth feel free fully; be independent don't give your mind others to control from beyond the curtain or remote also let ur gods who soever they be save themselves from CORONA you have made to scare all gods and humans equally well said MB OF BDDDDDDDDDDDDD so, come out; breathe the fresh air of the beach and natural earth

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 02 June 2020

take your decision......realistic

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Varsha M 02 June 2020

Beautifully written sir. Come breathe the fresh air of the Earth....nice to read sir.

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