Commitment Poem by Savita Tyagi

Commitment



A million reason to abandon your love
Yet just one to stay
Does commitment rings a bell?

Till death do us part
A vague memory
like a fat white cloud
floats in blue sky
Its visual appearance all but dull
But hidden there are millions of vapors
All pointing to one thing
Water is always there
Its shape and form invisible
Love travels through many channels
To thrive and abide in commitment.

Thursday, May 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 01 May 2014

A very thoughtful write. Nice.

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Love is like water. Water is always there Its shape and form invisible Beautifully expressed in the poem. Thank you.

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Savita Tyagi 03 July 2019

Thank you chandini for an appreciative comment. Just read your new poem and left a comment. so good to see a young girl using the power of pen. My best wishes for you.

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Chandini Jaswal 03 July 2019

A million reason to abandon your love Yet just one to stay Does commitment rings a bell? Simple lines, but so deep and meaningful. Enjoyed the poem, Ma'am.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2015

An intensive poem so nicely and aptly presented. Favourite lines are....Love travels through many channels To thrive and abide in commitment.. Thnaks for sharing. .....10

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Susan Lacovara 25 May 2014

Starting together is easy, staying together takes work! You have done well to remind us of what commitment reply represents. Excellent poem. PEACE

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Valsa George 06 May 2014

Love travels through many channels To thrive and abide in commitment. Inspite of many reasons to drift apart, we stick together to a commitment as love travels through many channels....! A thoughtful write, open and frank! !

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