Commitment Poem by Aqua Flower

Commitment

Rating: 5.0


My heartbeat skipped a beat today
Your face flashing before me
as I reminisce of our shared ecstacy
Isn't that enough?
Why do I doubt your love so much?
Is it because I know that
commitment comes with trust?
What will then become of us?

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Saturday, November 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,loyalty,trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lexi Muegge 22 February 2019

Such a relatable feeling, and eloquently delivered. Thanks for sharing! ~

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Aqua Flower 22 February 2019

Thank you for reading Lexi. Such a lovely comment too!

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Carl Roussell 26 November 2018

Is love a feeling or just a word? Sometimes you just don't know, and can you go on in this hinterland? A really good write and a 10.

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Aqua Flower 22 February 2019

Love without commitment is love that is always falling short! Committment says " I will always be there for you, forever! " Thanks for reading!

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Kostas Lagos 25 November 2018

There is no trust and commitment in love. Love, true love, is freedom in its purest form. This freedom cancels every thought of betrayal.

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Aqua Flower 25 November 2018

You make a very good point regrading trust and committment. It is like the saying If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, it was meant to be. Thank you for your comment!

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 November 2018

Very nice poem. Love based upon trust is sublime. Loved the way you have expressed it. Thanks for sharing.

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Aqua Flower 24 November 2018

Thank you for visiting this poem ran for appreciating how I described committment. Trust is a must.

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