My heartbeat skipped a beat today
Your face flashing before me
as I reminisce of our shared ecstacy
Isn't that enough?
Why do I doubt your love so much?
Is it because I know that
commitment comes with trust?
What will then become of us?
Copyright @ Aqua Flower
Is love a feeling or just a word? Sometimes you just don't know, and can you go on in this hinterland? A really good write and a 10.
Love without commitment is love that is always falling short! Committment says " I will always be there for you, forever! " Thanks for reading!
There is no trust and commitment in love. Love, true love, is freedom in its purest form. This freedom cancels every thought of betrayal.
You make a very good point regrading trust and committment. It is like the saying If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, it was meant to be. Thank you for your comment!
Very nice poem. Love based upon trust is sublime. Loved the way you have expressed it. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for visiting this poem ran for appreciating how I described committment. Trust is a must.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a relatable feeling, and eloquently delivered. Thanks for sharing! ~
Thank you for reading Lexi. Such a lovely comment too!